Fire Poem by ashley fulford

Fire

Rating: 5.0


shall i say what i truely am
a pyro by day
or a demon by night
playing in the eternal fire
A light burning so bright
burning the forest of the night
Fire...
is all i know....
is all i enjoy
it's what you are
your the one who lets me feel...
the love, the desire, the heat, the passions
you are a fire burning so wild and free through out my heart
a flame never to be tamed
and now i am the same
you've tempted me to burn forever with you
yet never be trapped
we are to be as wild and as free
as a single flame flickering at the middle of the night
and being each others only light
a fire so hot shall show my love true
and forever i shall burn with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

How the voice feels she is around him like fire mild at one time, and fierce at the other time. Interesting.

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Jay Boyd 22 August 2009

alot of emotions id like to discuss this poem on a later note

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Iron Panda 23™ 16 February 2010

this...is AWESOME! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 28 November 2009

Very hot my tongue almost burn..hehe I liked it I will read more of your work

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Merna Ibrahim 19 October 2009

Very interesting and the passion in this poem is as the Fire! ! Thanks for sharing :) Merna..

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DaNa XxX 24 September 2009

dear ashley, i found your poem quite interisting... what a great job you did here..^_^ keep it up my friend :) DaNa...

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Stephen Magill 04 September 2009

great poem and for a lot of reasons i find it very interesting. steve

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