Fire Dream Poem by Smoky Hoss

Fire Dream



A dazzling fire white flash
Illumines deep into my night sky.
I stare in amazed awe...
As timidly I wonder,
Am I - is anyone - ever ready to die?
A question without answer,
Perhaps the answer is without reason
And therefore cannot find expression.
Death - like this blinding light - stands before me, blazing.
Neither can be denied;
By way of such pondering
I find closer to the light I am drawn,
Or it to me -
At the lights center now I see
A spot fading just low enough for recognition,
It is the size and shape of an ordinary door.
Curiosity driven by desire to understand
Holds at bay my fear of daunting death,
So I move further into the great light,
Toward the doorway -

This closed door seems to beg me to open
- open it or myself I am uncertain -
Three feet from it's threshold I see
It is a door of burning cold-fire,
The knob solid gold...
Without lock.
From beyond the door I now hear music
- very good music -
My desire intensifies!
As does the rhythm of my heart beats,
Slowly I reach, and then grasp
The golden knob...
I awake!
Lying in bed, in the darkness of night,
Shaking, my mind roils,
Vexing, what had it all meant?
And where, and why, had it went?
A felicitous vagary; an arduous vision;
I do not know for certain.
Only this from my enigmatic dream
Do I comprehend:
Death does truly await me,
Perhaps though it is not to be quite so feared
As I once believed.
There may even be great joy and surprise
On the other side of that effulgent doorway.
I can only but trust God
To, someday, open it for me,
It is not mine to do. And
For that,
I am exceedingly grateful.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 06 September 2011

Very deep and moving, powerful poetry...pleasure to read.

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Eric Cockrell 30 August 2011

very good poem sir... befriend death, in doing so one learns to live!

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Phyllis Strong 29 August 2011

Most people want to go to heaven, but some have that fear of dying to get there. The way the Bible describes heaven, it’s really a much better place than this earth. I choose not to die, but for the Lord Jesus to come back and I’m caught up in the air; as it states in 1 Thessalonians 4: 16-18 “For the Lord himself will come down from heaven, with a loud command, with the voice of the archangel and with the trumpet call of God, and the dead in Christ will rise first. After that, we who are still alive and are left will be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And so we will be with the Lord forever. Therefore encourage each other with these words.” Phyllis

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Phyllis Strong 29 August 2011

Most people want to go to heaven, but some have that fear of dying to get there. The way the Bible describes heaven, it’s really a much better place than this earth. I choose not to die, but for the Lord Jesus to come back and I’m caught up in the air; as it states in 1 Thessalonians 4: 16-18 “For the Lord himself will come down from heaven, with a loud command, with the voice of the archangel and with the trumpet call of God, and the dead in Christ will rise first. After that, we who are still alive and are left will be caught up together with them in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air. And so we will be with the Lord forever. Therefore encourage each other with these words.' Phyllis

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Patti Masterman 29 August 2011

I think if you live as well as you know how, you can go through that other door with only excitement and curiosity.

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