Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 90,240 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

First Flinch From Wincing - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Running away from the right thing to do,
When the wrong thing has found acceptance...
Just delays those installment payments of blood.
Pretending not to see what is obvious,
Comes with a pinch
Until that wince turns into a scream.
And that first flinch from wincing,
Becomes a nightmare no one dreamed!


Comments about First Flinch From Wincing by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (3/22/2007 12:20:00 AM)

    Likewise I'll love to share with friends this poem of yours clearly observed in its message as concise in its form. (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/21/2007 11:51:00 PM)

    All which is promlematic, and is not addressed as seeds
    Will surely manifest as poison growth with problem needs

    L.S.>>>Words of wisdom from a pen that flows so weetly..Solid succinct quilling!

    F.J.R.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 5, 2011


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