First To Thirst With An Impression Rehearsed Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

First To Thirst With An Impression Rehearsed



If success and the encouragement of it received,
Had always been the objective to reflect greatness...
The presence of failure would not have been introduced,
To produce mediocrity to use as an accomplished goal.
And those making attempts to reach higher to achieve,
Would never be opposed by disbelievers who deceive.
IF insecurities and greed were not priorities to feed...
First!
To thirst.
With an impression rehearsed upon those observing.
If success and the encouragement of it received,
Had always been the objective to reflect greatness...
The presence of failure would not have been introduced,
To produce mediocrity to use as an accomplished goal.
Or advocating divisions with an emphasis on race,
To minimize greatness and those benefits replaced!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 October 2012

It is normal in human psychologically. I like everyone, irrespective of their orientations, but sometimes too boring to be associated with people who speak negatively, though I listen to them to find out what I should not do when i talk to others...Have you got so many 1st grade? why did you remove the column? anyway 10 for you..

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