It is yet deep night of dream
flames of fire by the candles
livid darkness snaffles pale
scruples never hold it back
eyes look limpid by the dew
shadow of love tip toes into room
candle overawes by its gleams
brazier rays of fall cascade
grace of love blushes half muffled
scarlet red redounds in wine redolent
full moon redoubts of elysian blue
light follows path of deliverance
Romance draped in Nature moves around your poem. Superb in imagery and majestic in gait. CP
I almost think there is something about your poems, maybe but sure there is something puzzling... gives a slightly strange feeling, does it?
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem is bathed in candle-light. It's flickering color floods the page and inspires the reader. A romantic, sensuous poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥