Flight Of Failure Poem by Soumita Sarkar

Flight Of Failure

Rating: 5.0


The vast ocean goes dry,
when a shadow is nearby,
life turns a flight of failure,
layers of hope seem to lie.

Man builds God breaks
Man struggles God shatters
Man devotes God dictates
Man heralds God hushes

The vast ocean goes dry,
when a shadow is nearby,
this shadow can be you or me,
with misfortune as a strong company.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Martindale 28 June 2013

Without contrast, life, like our TV screens, wouldn't be as interesting. Solomon calls us to remember Vanity, vanity, all is vanity. We keep building and time knocks the buildings down, but without us trying again, we'd all be homeless.

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R.j. Wynn 14 June 2013

We all think god will get us, and we overlook the cross of Christ, so don't hit your head too hard.

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Hazel Durham 25 May 2013

Love it, we can all have misfortune in our lives and life it seems is sucked dry. it has nothing left to offer us! Excellent write! !

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