Saturday, November 15, 2014

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Hues of nature turned as dawn
There on the bed lie few dew drops
Dreary dreams and absent trust
Abandoned part of rain or flows
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SALINI NAIR
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Valsa George 03 December 2014

Beauty that augment itself Glittering gems on nature's gown Beautiful description of dew drops on the bare bed of the Earth! Enjoyed!

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 24 November 2014

Like other poems of the poetess I see some holistic approach of life and nature that sees by the poetess and in this poem also it is similar and woven it with beautiful yarns of words that makes the poetry a nice one and likes to the extent of a good poetry.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2014

Beauty that augment itself Glittering gems on nature's gown Presentation of poem is in excellent way done. Very nicely penned and presented that touches heart with memorable each lines.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 November 2014

Due, a pious symbol, has always been an attractive topic for the poets. This poem is beautifully centralized on it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 November 2014

A lovely sketch thanks a lot

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

Beauty that augment itself Glittering gems on nature's gown Thrust the vain with a generous gift Take to the yard of hopefulness Nature's spray of beauty on the earth is an evidence that earth is not yet too ugly. Nature is hopeful, so we should be.

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Kee Thampi 18 November 2014

Lure the world to the reformed part Waves that splendid and fertile A part of mighty cascade sometimes Lie on the splendid hands of nature beauty of lovable nature

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Ramesh Rai 16 November 2014

A beautiful sketch of your imagination. Keep it up.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 November 2014

Nice nature poem with wonderful, creative lines in fact is very inspiring..........amazing write

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