For you.
With an eye for genuine wisdom,
I clutched your hand and lured you in.
Across an enchanted forest with impassable fog,
I made out your face and it was honest beauty.
You hymned my name through the soft coiled mist,
I replied with what I thought a memorable kiss.
Covered with impeccable virtue and confident style,
I rose to my feet and stared for a time.
With shivers and shocks from your mesmerising debris,
I fell into a dream where I strolled on the sea.
But still I searched for your dear vacant soul,
To uncover and save it was my only ambition.
You laughed and cried and never whispered goodbye,
It was a staggering day though full of passionate sighs.
Yet still in my mind I pondered the heavenly,
Your elegant figure succumbed to my imaginable finger.
I noticed you in a dream last night bordering confession,
Our eyes sealed with an everlasting obsession.
I had you then but now I cease to ask for reality,
Was it I you adored, or the company we implored?
Copyright © ®2009, Chris Holmberg. All rights reserved
Well, my dear poet friend...A true and sincere explanation, that defines love from your point of view...I agree with what you'd written...beautifully penned...bravo 10+
This poem is extremely well-written. It seems to be either a chance encounter or a figment of your imagination- this woman. You could post it on Craigslist in the Missed Connections section - put a link to your poems. I don't mean that to reflect negatively on your poem it just seems fitting.
'You laughed and cried and never whispered goodbye, It was a staggering day though full of passionate sighs'... these lines are very much poetic...most i liked in this write...thanks...10
Our eyes sealed with an everlasting obsession.Beautiful Superb
I consider this a well written love letter addressed to a lovely damsel, a love letter that is not written in standard form but in poetry form. I should say in prose and that makes it more romantic. Well done, mate.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its a masterpiece i can say a fine poem from such a young poet 10+++