Oh time
You walk always
In front of me
In your crawling shadow
You hide me somewhere
Perhaps you could hide me
Here forever
But beware
I may break your shadow
And fly to eternity.
Tiny, but power packed! I love this, the idea of never being satisfied - not even with forever. That is human nature for sure, blessed with forever but still seeking eternity lol. A captivating write! ^^ ~Nika
A poem with great message. Very true said I may break your shadow and fly to eternity.
wonderful piece.........Jayachandran..........I love your poems.........please read my poems at your leisure........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love this piece of poem... simple and beautiful