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Forever

Rating: 5.0

Oh time
You walk always
In front of me
In your crawling shadow
You hide me somewhere
Perhaps you could hide me
Here forever
But beware
I may break your shadow
And fly to eternity.

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poem on life
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Mary Amrutha 12 January 2014

i love this piece of poem... simple and beautiful

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Nika Mcguin 05 March 2014

Tiny, but power packed! I love this, the idea of never being satisfied - not even with forever. That is human nature for sure, blessed with forever but still seeking eternity lol. A captivating write! ^^ ~Nika

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 January 2014

A poem with great message. Very true said I may break your shadow and fly to eternity.

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Valsa George 14 January 2014

Short and burdened with meaning! Enjoyed this great write! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 January 2014

ending in a positive note it flows smooth.liked it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 January 2014

wonderful piece.........Jayachandran..........I love your poems.........please read my poems at your leisure........

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