In the
abyss
of a heart
stretching
across
the miles
searching
for you
perhaps
in a
fantasy
forever
lost
somewhere
in the canyons
of my mind.
Genuine feelings of loss forever in the heart always in the mind searching moments I think we all have, expressed so well...regards
This search for a beloved one, the lost one, is perhaps eternal. You search every nook and corner of your heart, but how will you find if one is 'forever lost somewhere in the canyons' of your mind? A deep thought, touchy! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Best wishes, happy writing!
such findings and losings...this is what this game of searching is all about...you claim to find someone you search by losing you...
So simple and yet so meaningful! Beautifully said and nicely written!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Abyss of the heart and canyons of the mind. Nice images indicating depth of feelings. Nice poem. Thank you.