Forever Lost Poem by Heather Burns

Forever Lost

Rating: 4.5


In the
abyss
of a heart
stretching
across
the miles

searching
for you

perhaps
in a
fantasy

forever
lost

somewhere
in the canyons
of my mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 December 2013

Abyss of the heart and canyons of the mind. Nice images indicating depth of feelings. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Ken E Hall 28 May 2015

Genuine feelings of loss forever in the heart always in the mind searching moments I think we all have, expressed so well...regards

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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2014

This search for a beloved one, the lost one, is perhaps eternal. You search every nook and corner of your heart, but how will you find if one is 'forever lost somewhere in the canyons' of your mind? A deep thought, touchy! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Best wishes, happy writing!

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

such findings and losings...this is what this game of searching is all about...you claim to find someone you search by losing you...

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 December 2013

Poem with indepth feelings..Beautiful way is portrayed.

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Dee Corpolongo 07 December 2013

So simple and yet so meaningful! Beautifully said and nicely written!

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