Forever Unfulfilled Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Forever Unfulfilled

Rating: 5.0


thelettersruntogether
creating random words
etched painstakingly
into history by
tormented souls
who remain unfulfilled.

Empathetic eyes
seeking counsel
through bleeding wounds
of forgotten artists
remain unfulfilled.


Fools trying to find meaning
of cryptic words
spilled as a last resort
remain unfulfilled.
Thirsting for answers
to questions unasked
by timid minds
that remain unfulfilled.
thelettersruntogether

Confusing random thoughts
written with the intent
of reviving deadened souls
which remain unfulfilled.
Visceral descriptions
fall on ears deafened
to pleading voices
of those unfulfilled.

Literal translations
inked permanently
into oblivions abyss
echo unfulfilled.

thelettersruntogether
Condemning restless
spirits to an eternity
of emptiness

and a perpetual state
of uncertainty.
Forever unfulfilled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 23 February 2007

Kristin, this is brilliant - penned with pain and rage and frustration - and yet? There is something else. Something greater that shines through your carefully chosen words. A masterpiece. love, Allie xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 February 2007

Facinating display of contemporary abstract lit., my dear...runonstendtoconfuse... butyoursarejusteloquentlyabtruse! Greatjobkris! Frankster J R

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Alison Smith 22 February 2007

Hope the lettersruntogether are not unfullfilled in you... Alison

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Chad Fisher 22 February 2007

very nice reflection... though not all poetry asks questions to unanswered unfulfilled, I would venture that most do, for the very essence of life runs together as well, answers of life unfulfilled. But this is both a curse and a blessing, in the realm of poetry, literature, paintings, or even the art of living life itself.

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Geoff Warden 22 February 2007

WELL DONE, this being said I shall never look upon written word in the same light again.............

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