VIPINS PUTHOORAN


Forgive Me For Once - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Oh, God, why did you forsake his life
Admist all these unwanted strife?
Everything is vanishing from his skies
The doors are closed before his eyes
Death itself hated him so reluctantly
When he tried to quit the ghost hesistantly
I may be cursing the life of a man
For giving the beat in his heart again
To flutter his broken wings in the desert of pain
As he's a wrecked ship in a turbulent sea
And he has nothing worth left in him
He lives a life like a nomad lost his sanity
Who lost all his innocent dreams purity
He hears the song of grief in his ears
They tend him to taste again the tears
O, He lost the strength of his marrows
He drinks the poison of sorrows
That drowning him to an abysm of depression
Where he sighs deadly without any progression
Like a corpse he sleeps there forgetting you
He hides his love reluctantly from you
His wounded mind is in the path of insanity
For he is lost e'erything from his reality
Forgive him, O the loving brother
Forgive him, O the loving sister
Forgive him before he goes into a peaceful sleep,
He give up all his dreams as they look like a heap
Forgive him for once, just once,
As he has ever loved you all in abundance


Comments about Forgive Me For Once by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • (2/9/2012 9:55:00 AM)


    For I'm drinking the poison of my sorrows
    And I'm drowning to the unseen abysm of depression

    Yes! I can echo the pain of the poet. But i think he has written by his master imagination. I like this poem very much as life is not always a walk of piece of cake it is tight rope walk! Well-done Vipins!
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  • (1/28/2012 8:52:00 AM)


    Superb poem my friend....i echoe Sanu and Soul...! ! (Report) Reply

  • (1/27/2012 2:12:00 AM)


    hey where is my comment poem hunter? ? ? ? ? ?
    Anyway I will repeat....I want to tell you the same thing which is said by our brother soul.
    this life is given by the God, , , and only he has the right to take it back...we have no right to end this life.....take care...
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  • (1/27/2012 1:48:00 AM)


    I too want to say the same thing which is said by our brother soul.....
    life is given by god...and he possess the right to take it back.....we have no right to end our life....
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  • Unwritten Soul (1/27/2012 1:08:00 AM)


    You always got everyone forgiveness but with one condition, keep your life alive..why God refuse to take you away from us, coz He knows the best that this is not best time for you to give up...it's time to continue and it's your task! ! ! now go and let sanity pour in you..welcome to life again Vipins..._Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013


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