Goblet Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Goblet

Rating: 5.0


The heart is like a goblet
Pellucid and breakable;
Between its crystalline wall,
Happiness and sadness surging
Like an intoxicating wine
Occupying its colour and odour senselessly,
Tasting its pungency with hardache,
Breathing its fragrance with a soft smile.
Then who can know that
This goblet can occupy
Any kind of wine.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: colour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

It is subtle use of metaphors and images which make this enticing poem more impressive! A comprehensive work by master poet! Dearest Vipins you scored a Century! I mean 100/100 for sharing this poem!

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Brilliant metaphors in brevity of words and i appreciate my read here.Hats off

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Stefanie Fontker 15 September 2011

I really like this one. You've made an interesting metaphor. Beautiful writing.

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