Forgiving Detection Poem by Silent Speaker

Forgiving Detection

Rating: 2.3


Anger
struggle with I do
Hate
I have because of you

Pain
I daily feel
Frustration
to me so real

Hurt
eating away inside me
Bitter
I no longer want to be

Guilt
my own reflection
God
my forgiving detection

Sunday, May 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,eating,frustration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cory Davis 11 June 2009

Wow, you've improved so much! This is amazing. I'm always looking for interesting structures. Very well done.

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