siddharth singh.

Forsaken.

The moment you saw me
I knew you were hooked.
I knew by your sighs
and by the way you looked.

For you it was hard
I swear, I knew it from the start.
Still I wished for you to say,
thinking, with me was
where your future lay.

Scared you were
of my feelings
never could you
convey the meaning.

It was me
you wanted the most,
but when I spoke to you,
you were numb and lost.

To your friends
you used to lie,
but you could never
look me in the eye.

Overpowering desire
that you felt for me,
was there for me to see.

Now that you are taken,
It's your love for me
you have forsaken.

Far away with him you live
my love to him is what you give.

Your happiness is for what i pray
with him is where your future does lay! ! !

Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 11, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 28, 2011

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (2/21/2010 3:28:00 AM)

    very touchingly poeticised.

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  • Sandra Fowler (1/2/2010 6:32:00 AM)

    Very touching and heartfelt.
    May your prayer bring
    peace to both of you.

    Happy New Year.

    Blessings from,

    Sandra

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  • Monica Singh (11/2/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    whatever u write sweety seems as if it is directly coming out of ur heart. your usage of words simply extraordinary.

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  • Seema(Aanamika) 80 (10/27/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    So emotional so touching...Great! 10+++keep writing dear..

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  • Anupama Raghavendran (10/7/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    a very touching poem abt love....

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  • Rup Pokharel (8/19/2009 9:44:00 PM)

    I salute your emotion! ! !
    so touching......
    10+

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  • Avinash Singh (8/14/2009 12:50:00 PM)

    A very sensitive piece of work!

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  • Preeti Chauhan (8/2/2009 3:14:00 AM)

    This one is quite touching..congratulations and wish you lots of luck..i hope to see more poems coming from your side.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    The moment you saw me
    I knew you were hooked.
    I knew by your sighs
    and by the way you looked.

    i was just for it... very good dear...keep it up...10

    read mine miss i miis u..anywhere..love at first sight

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  • Lakshmi Venkataraman (7/22/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    cute 1! ! ! nice! .......................great goin! !

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  • Deborah CromerDeborah Cromer (7/19/2009 11:14:00 PM)

    You are a good writer. I want you to be better. Suggestions only! i should be I, never the small leter. 'cause with me', would read smoother if said 'thinking with me'. At the end, your future does lay would read easier too. I want you to be encouraged with how good you are. I am not saying your writing is bad! It is very good, but I know it could be better. :) Just suggestions and keep up the good work. Deborah Cromer

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  • Sai Saketh (7/19/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem......Very Nice...

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (7/19/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    A heartfelt piece Siddharth - you have definitely captivated your reader with this great write 10

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  • Anjali Sinha (7/12/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    Your love
    So pure and pristine
    Like crystal waters
    That shine
    Flow from your heart
    So divine

    Scared I was of your feeling
    Did you think it that way?
    For me, it made more meaning
    That one so far away
    Could think that
    With him my future lay.

    Tis only pure blessings
    From your soul,
    And yes happiness,
    that I seek
    That you pray
    And part with
    I wish to take away

    lovely Siddharth
    I got carried away
    and wrote this.
    Ill give you an A+++ and 10+
    anjali

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