Forsaken. Poem by siddharth singh.

Forsaken.

Rating: 5.0


The moment you saw me
I knew you were hooked.
I knew by your sighs
and by the way you looked.

For you it was hard
I swear, I knew it from the start.
Still I wished for you to say,
thinking, with me was
where your future lay.

Scared you were
of my feelings
never could you
convey the meaning.

It was me
you wanted the most,
but when I spoke to you,
you were numb and lost.

To your friends
you used to lie,
but you could never
look me in the eye.

Overpowering desire
that you felt for me,
was there for me to see.

Now that you are taken,
It's your love for me
you have forsaken.

Far away with him you live
my love to him is what you give.

Your happiness is for what i pray
with him is where your future does lay! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rup Pokharel 19 August 2009

I salute your emotion! ! ! so touching...... 10+

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Avinash Singh 14 August 2009

A very sensitive piece of work!

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Preeti Chauhan 02 August 2009

This one is quite touching..congratulations and wish you lots of luck..i hope to see more poems coming from your side.

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The moment you saw me I knew you were hooked. I knew by your sighs and by the way you looked. i was just for it... very good dear...keep it up...10 read mine miss i miis u..anywhere..love at first sight

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 22 July 2009

cute 1! ! ! nice! .......................great goin! !

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Pradyumna Jyotir 21 February 2010

very touchingly poeticised.

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Sandra Fowler 02 January 2010

Very touching and heartfelt. May your prayer bring peace to both of you. Happy New Year. Blessings from, Sandra

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Monica Singh 02 November 2009

whatever u write sweety seems as if it is directly coming out of ur heart. your usage of words simply extraordinary.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 October 2009

So emotional so touching...Great! 10+++keep writing dear..

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

a very touching poem abt love....

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