Dream. Poem by siddharth singh.

Dream.

Rating: 4.9


There she was,
wrapped up in a pretty french gown.
Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright
were dazzling like the moonlight.
Her luscious lips were on fire
almost burning with desire.
Her body smelt of a fragrance so sweet
that it escalated my heartbeat.
She spread her arms like a wing
as if inviting me to come in.
Her breath on my face
felt like the first drops of rain
and took away all my pain.
Then she was gone
without a trace.
Into the darkness of the night she vanished.
Who was she?
Perhaps a dream that brought me to life! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepti Agarwal 24 July 2009

A dream which can bring life to someone is always lively.... :) a good imaginative work.

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 July 2009

nice dream.. nice and clear description.. the suspense and picture is vivid.. thanks for sharing 10/10 lovelots, Maia

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Preeti Chauhan 01 August 2009

This one makes one wish for more...

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 03 August 2009

Beautiful par excellence an enthralling write siddharth - thanks for inviting me

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Angela Michel 05 August 2009

Excellent, unexpected ending.

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Anonymous Butterfly 28 April 2010

I liked the lines: Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright were dazzling like the moonlight. And: Her breath on my face felt like the first drops of rain. My! ! ! A beautiful piece you have painted here. A dreamy picture like a dream. I enjoyed reading every word. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Pamela Lutwyche 03 April 2010

Dreams can be so real and put you in a good mood. I’m glad you had a good dream.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 21 February 2010

wow....what a dream...wished you never woke up. Lovely poem.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 October 2009

A beautiful dream, well composed 10++

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

lovely......the imagery is too good....: D

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