siddharth singh.

Dream.

There she was,
wrapped up in a pretty french gown.
Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright
were dazzling like the moonlight.
Her luscious lips were on fire
almost burning with desire.
Her body smelt of a fragrance so sweet
that it escalated my heartbeat.
She spread her arms like a wing
as if inviting me to come in.
Her breath on my face
felt like the first drops of rain
and took away all my pain.
Then she was gone
without a trace.
Into the darkness of the night she vanished.
Who was she?
Perhaps a dream that brought me to life! ! !

Poem Submitted: Friday, July 10, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 25, 2011

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  • Anonymous Butterfly (4/28/2010 7:52:00 AM)

    I liked the lines:

    Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright
    were dazzling like the moonlight.

    And:

    Her breath on my face
    felt like the first drops of rain.

    My! ! ! A beautiful piece you have painted here. A dreamy picture like a dream. I enjoyed reading every word.
    Have a nice day.


    B.B.

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  • Pamela Lutwyche (4/3/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    Dreams can be so real and put you in a good mood. I’m glad you had a good dream.

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  • Pradyumna Jyotir (2/21/2010 3:27:00 AM)

    wow....what a dream...wished you never woke up. Lovely poem.

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  • Seema(Aanamika) 80 (10/27/2009 6:38:00 AM)

    A beautiful dream, well composed 10++

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  • Anupama Raghavendran (10/7/2009 2:42:00 AM)

    lovely......the imagery is too good....: D

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/17/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    Excellent touch down.
    Wow!
    Ten
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Annabel Sheila (8/17/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Loved it! The imagery was beautiful! Great job.

    Anna

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (8/14/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    Ammmmmazing pictograph! Amazing wording!
    10+

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  • Carmen Johnson (8/12/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    Very beautiful imagery. I simply thought it was fantastic. You perchance, might like my 'it feels so damn good' lol; -)

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/11/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    What is a poet without a dream? It is like a writer without a pen. A beautiful poem with gorgeous images. 10 Karin Anderson

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (8/8/2009 2:29:00 PM)

    nice double simile:
    ''She spread her arms like a wing
    as if inviting me to come in''
    wonderful portrait, well written poem.10+++

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  • Angela Michel (8/5/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    Excellent, unexpected ending.

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  • Cindy Kreiner SeraCindy Kreiner Sera (8/3/2009 4:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful par excellence an enthralling write siddharth - thanks for inviting me

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  • Preeti Chauhan (8/1/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    This one makes one wish for more...

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (7/28/2009 7:35:00 PM)

    nice dream..
    nice and clear description..
    the suspense and picture is vivid..
    thanks for sharing
    10/10

    lovelots,
    Maia

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  • Deepti Agarwal (7/24/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    A dream which can bring life to someone is always lively.... :)

    a good imaginative work.

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  • Lakshmi Venkataraman (7/22/2009 3:02:00 AM)

    dream wil always stay in poetry! ! !
    wonderful write! ! ! ! amazing usage! !

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  • Ruchi Poddar (7/21/2009 6:58:00 AM)

    Wow! What a lovely poem. The flow of the poem & the words used made me think that was it actually a dream or reality. u get a 10++++++.

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  • Nikunj Sharma (7/20/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    nice poem Siddharth.... short and sweet. Please read my poems called ADILA, My Dream and Lets dream...hope you shall find them worth your while

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  • Rishi Poddar (7/19/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    she was katrina kaif

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