Fragrant Night Poem by Sophia White

Fragrant Night

Rating: 5.0


Fragrant night
(Cool, crisp air laden with blossoms)
Somber light
(Bright round moon sends silver caresses)
Whispering trees
(Oaks and pines engage in a slow dance)
Slumbering breeze
(Wind flows as though it goes half-asleep)
Beautiful stars
(Bristling the sky with a thousand soft lights)
Rumbling cars
(Tearing the night to slivers as they interrupt)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Landrey 12 November 2006

Creative. Random. Original. Master use of the readers mind. (ooo, telekinosis, or something...) -landrey

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Prasanna Kumari 10 November 2006

your fragrant night is just seductive for anybody....

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Raymond Wright 10 November 2006

Swept away for a moment into the evening breeze... Stunning visual, Sophia! What a beautiful poem - Too bad those rumbling cars ruin everything! ~Ray

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