Free Poem by Whispering Rose

Oh whispering rose, u know why u have such wonderful scent? because u always let the negative go away from u...negative only bring bad odor for u...and being positive always make u beautiful and blooming forever...love this one! 10/10..keep writing i by using ur heart...it will call many bees(poem hunters) to come!

Will of choice is so important. To have discernment and listen to our heart will lead us in the right direction. At times one has to make a stand., in order not to be ensnared or caught up in the neagative. A wonderfully written poem, one which I think a lot of teenagers could learn by! ; D

I like it and I really agree with several aspects #1 you realize you have to think for yourself and voice your own beliefs #2 you can't live in other people's dreams, if our dreams interweve great, but I can't be a prisoner of another's dreams and #3 you realize you will falter and you will cry, but you will continue because ultimately you are free to do so. Free to fall, free to fly how YOU see fit, great job.

it is a great challange u can take. brave enough to be all sucessful.i feel u r able to do it. u expressed the challange in a very beautiful way.no revenge / ne self ego /no hard feelings just a just challange.thanks for the courage u symbolize.

A beautiful poem, Whispering Rose, about a woman taking charge of her own life. I love htes lines: I will not be trapped in your dreams I might fail, I will cry but you'll never see me broken

Beautifully written again. You have such a great way you express yourself.

wow. a struggle most humans face: to go their own way instead of merely conforming to expectations of another. i like it! nice write! ! ! i hope you succeed! :)

Well written... and well expressed emotions... indeed a wonderful poem