Freedom............... Poem by Wassila Nader

Freedom...............

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We reached life free,
I hope this will forever be,
but do you think so?
this'll be till you grow?
I don't think so.....

Why wars?
why hate?
why killing others?

If every one lived free,
What will be?
if all people loved each others,
what will be?

I want to live free,
with all who deserve to be,
I really want to know, what will be?
what life will be?
if we lived free.

Tell me if you know,
what will be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 22 January 2010

a question which we all need an answer to 'waht will life be like when there is no war' well written

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Qualitative questions my friend!

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Earam Dio 14 December 2009

good wisdoms in a good poem, go on my friend

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 December 2009

very well done, constructed, and most of all --- well presented!

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Louis Rams 01 December 2009

very well put. and in proper perspective.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 December 2012

Great poem, the thought alone is so liberating, thanks for expressing it into words.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 October 2010

Thoughts of freeness is partial. Just remember Russoeu...Man is born free but everywhere is in chain.....First chain we feel ''The Time'. We can't get free from it. Second chain is our 'Instinct'....very hard to get free from it. Like this so many prisons are there like love and so....so........ So all the people can not be free from the root at a time, ultimately nature will not allow it. So, keep your head free from this kind of thinking. Economic indipendence is yet our mission to achieve for all.....thats sufficient perhaps. Our fight with each other will then come to a corner I think. Thank you.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010

Can't say that I can see a world without war, or freedom for all. As far as freedom goes I think most will think of lack of captivity as such. Warfare is personal, I believe people have a lack of self-knowlege and a lack of love for self. That lack of understanding is what leads to spiraling into confusion, aggression, and violence. And communication and patience is key, but I wonder if when we looked at others and we only saw ourselves how would we behave? Great command of your poem

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Enjoyable read. So true ...O what it would be to be free.. Good one.

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Then your quill may have not seen light.

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