Freedom In Cage Poem by yashar rezaeipour

The Wind Laughed In His Sleeve and Told First, Try To Bear the Pain of Homelessness and Vagrancy Homelessness can be so demoralizing and yet many come through it, and sometimes much stronger We must all spare a thought for those who are in a less fortunate set of circumstances than our-selves Love duncan X

Very nice imagery here. I enjoyed the serenity that came to mind as I read your words. Great read. :) bobbie

fine poem, Yashar. Created a fine image. Barbara James

Yashar, I like the appeal of this. 'Freedom, ' in essence, as a state of mind in which each of us has power to expand our own thoughts and dreams as we see fit. And, it's up to us as individuals to do so. Good write! Brian

Wonderful poem, bearing the pain of the homeless would certainly be walking in another man's shoes, what better way to know the suffering of others but to suffer oneself. I find your poem interesting, one of deep thought. I feel you as a poet was able to bring the reader into the poem. Fine penning, keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work. Thankyou---Melvina---

i think the last line was very very deep and thoughtful...i liked ur poem... :)

Excellent writing You must write with a golden pen The words love you. 'Cage Of Every One Is As Big As His Dream Of Freedom! ' How true but how difficult for us to live up to Wishing you joy Pia

Very moving poem. If we allow our mind to be free then we will be too. Very nicely done. KK

This a short yet powrful one...are you really amature or you are just posting poems now? ? ? Anyway its great work yashar

I wonder - why is it only at rank 454 today? Should it not have been higher up in the pedastal? This is a masterpiece of its sort.... the mastery reflects in every line... the imagery stands-up in every word to reflect the theme of the poem!