Freedom Is Ours To Let Live, Live(Repost) Poem by Indira Renganathan

Freedom Is Ours To Let Live, Live(Repost)

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Liberty is mine to live or not
So I decide to breathe or not
But He above rules His my life
So is He with my life's strife
Only my sense to sense His knot

And my mind warns, my heart feels
My vision alerts to care my wheels
To choose the good to gain good
To avoid the bad not to brood
An eye third in me that reveals

Freedom so not to act and hurt
Nor spit on oneself to get hurt
Nor even to hurt any to fight
Nor high to die to say right
But to soar leveled joy to spurt

Freedom so to share joy and live
To serve, be served, such to thrive
Freedom not to be a selfish waste
So to be feckless a heedless taste
Freedom is ours to let live, live

Wednesday, March 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 March 2018

We all have freedom, but this freedom has to be regulated in such a way as not to interfere or encroach into another's freedom or cause inconvenience to anybody! We are given freedom by God to do some good to ourselves and also to others! Lofty thoughts, madam! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2018

Freedom so not to act and hurt Nor spit on oneself to get hurt Nor even to hurt any to fight Nor high to die to say right But to soar leveled joy to spurt.........yes, true dictum. Beautiful poem with nice expression.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 March 2018

Freedom is an inherent part of life. Without it life would be meaningless. This perspective has been captured in this amazing beautifully crafted write. A great piece well penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2018

Yes dear madam freedom is ours! Let peace and harmony prevail all around! Let blessings of seniors go with us! Stay always blessed! .. Dillip

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