Freedom Triumphs Poem by RAPHAEL UDEH

Freedom Triumphs

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Hearts held captive
Not by choice, nor by design
But by forces unknown - giants
Obviously not for you
Suddenly I remembered the great price, Just for me
Longing for freedom, willing but unable
Searching for tranquility, hopeful but not finding
Then comes power, my decision
Freedom unlocked

Minds in turmoil
Choice or chance
Imagine the refugee
Voices say wait, but for how long?
Then comes power
The carpenters!
Helping hands, angels in disguise
Undoubtedly from above
Freedom reborn

Birds of the air
Freedom personified
No wonder, the songs I hear
Life ruled by choice
Some are unwillingly and unable
Maybe able but unwilling, indeed helpless
Then comes power, the Highest
Able and willing, perfection now possible
Freedom triumphs

Friends join the train
Reach for more, the giant leap
And all giants are silenced, more freedom
Peace like no other, success unleashed
Generations unborn - how thankful
Power showcased, there's always more
Broaden the horizon
It all begins
When freedom triumphs

(3rd May,2018. Newcastle Australia)

Thursday, May 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,power
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A story on how personal determination and God's deliverance births the best of freedom to the human soul. True freedom = Choice + Divine help
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 03 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Raphael. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Raphael Udeh 09 May 2018

Thanks. Your poem is nice. Ralph

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Naila Rais 03 May 2018

A nice start . Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too. Naila

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Raphael Udeh 03 May 2018

Thanks a lot. I have read yours and it sounds good... Ralph

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