Daryl lyraD

Friends?

Empty fields, deserted concrete
all that is left in this barren place.
There's nothing
I hold dear, nothing.

Nothing anymore.


But where do I go now
at the crossroad splits
Stagnant.
Unsure.

I can't make up my mind.


What makes a clock tick?
What keeps a jigsaw together?
Everyone has something which holds them up,
a standing pillar of strength and support.

Friends you say?


Moving pictures,
neon lights.
Flashing, buzzing;
everything's a blur.

I think I took one dropp too many,
now that I'm feeling kinda funny.
Where did they all go?
I'm sure they were here a moment ago.

Friends you say?

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, July 16, 2011

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  • blank blank (11/22/2009 3:42:00 AM)

    wow. it has been on my favourite poems list for a while now. I just read it again. It's beautiful.

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/23/2009 4:07:00 PM)

    awesome... another great talent.. you gotz some.

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  • Catrina Heart (8/21/2009 5:28:00 AM)

    loved this poem so interesting to read! ! ! 10+++

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  • Deborah CromerDeborah Cromer (8/20/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    Good emotion mixed with mystery. Put together very well. Your choice of words mixed with questions is a good combination. Makes for good reading. DC

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  • Frank Lambert (8/15/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    Daryl,

    For a young writer, you certainly have a way with words. This is another champion verse, well done. Frank

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  • Passionate Flower (8/15/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    ah friends are so dear you know
    but when they depart it is really hard
    to have them back againg
    it is life
    you meet someone love and appreciate him or her
    then after after you finish fo instance study with he or she left
    and you stay with no friends
    it is so hard
    because they r so dear and precious
    thanx for the lovely poem
    love it
    regards

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