hello......... my goshhhhh.
she made me say my gosh and blush
for she said im fitting of her luscious heart.
she made me grin and smile, hop and skip
i promise you if you do, in safe I'll keep
it, protected in mine.
butterflies in my stomach,
because i feel your words are true,
do i take that chance i'm afraid to take,
because you know what to say,
to make me feel safe in every way,
my heart skips a beat,
when you tell me through poetry,
it's the sweetest thing i heard from a guy,
could that be why i'm falling?
you speak from the heart,
rather than just the mind,
if i had to tell you how i feel,
this could take all day,
you showed me it's okay,
just to show who i am,
what more could i ask for?
no longer do i hide,
the part of me i don't like,
because of you,
i'm not holding back as much,
as i would like.
Copyright © 2009
5-14-09
'hello......... my goshhhhh. she made me say my gosh and blush for she said im fitting of her luscious heart' should ve added posh and cushion, anyway very refreshing and relaxing poem indeed..thanks 10++
A good sequel to your first Friendship piece and a novel way to present a collaboration work - - again you both say how it is from the heart so a very sweet and romantic lilt to the verse - - keep writing and a top mark from me....10 + ++ Fay
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful sequel to your earlier poem on Friendship...you have a very romantic and straightforward writing style...10+ again