Thursday, April 19, 2007

From Dawn To Dusk Comments

Rating: 4.5

As the sky darkens I think of you
And all the things you said you would do
You said you would always be there
You said you would always care
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Hopeless Heart
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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nicely written poem, well done hopeless

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Ann Beard 28 January 2008

This poem has a nice flow to it, keep writing.

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Michael Fischer 19 April 2007

Beautiful poem! I like how you found your strength toward the end and found some serenity. Nice job. Top marks! -Michael

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Daniel Partlow 19 April 2007

Bravo, very glad for your recovery.

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