Gracefully from the garden
Of ecstasy in divine,
I plug't
Love
From the fruitful stem
Of God.
It test caring
and i share
With you...
Its the word
Of the greatest one
Of the high golden city
Supreme in splendours
Full of love to brim...
With heartfulness...
I pray this word's
portion
Be plant richly
In the precious piece
Of your gracious
Soul...
Nicely said! I love the way the poem speaks of heaven. To help improve your work you should use more detail to paint a better picture in the readers mind. More detail in the writing, the more unique your poems will become giving the readers a greater experience. Keep up the good work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is everytging in life! ! So, let us love all mankind and, live in peace. Nice work.