~ Fuss For Un-Gotten Why Then? ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Fuss For Un-Gotten Why Then? ~

Rating: 4.4


~ Fuss for Un-Gotten why then? ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010

Getting is but getting
Clichéd staled stereotyping!

Not getting is
Not truly ~ not getting
But getting much n’ more.

What we don’t get
Actually that is
Wow ~
Gotten the lush lavish
Luxuriant Un-Gotten!

Catch catharsis in Un-Gotten pliss!

Fuss for Un-Gotten why then?

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dear Poet it just like Memo [Psychic] to me to contemplate on ‘to be happy not with Gotten but with Un-Gotten’ Like ‘If it’s up to expectation is good if not best’…no worry no rivalry no drudgery no psychic beggary …excellent easel …thanks… 10++

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It is like reverse swing bowling in cricket…we all drool for un-gotten…but it is riches too Melancholy Melody why do we not think in this way…Gotten really stereotyped… find discover rapture in UN GOTTEN… 10+++ PS Savor the UN GOTTEN and get UN GOTTEN in full extent

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Bachha Chakravorty 04 July 2010

Packed with Wisdom Calorie to inculcate and contemplate…agree withy Pet Ma’am Indira…unique indeed ball all parameters 10

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Indira Babbellapati 30 June 2010

you have a unique way in giving expression to universal truths that when one reads, it reads as if it's for the first time...

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Milica Franchi De Luri 28 June 2010

People are never happy with what they get. It's always greener on the other side.....10

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Its brilliant and crackling 'Catch catharsis in Un-Gotten pliss! ' ~ Wow what a line Vedantic concept in poetic format well done Ms. Niv Thanks for sharing...10++

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Katang Chakravorty 24 May 2012

This is a crackling shot mind boggling Made easy for fuss for ungotten how to over come Thanks sharing

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Amitabha Bagchi 14 May 2012

If we get everything [a kind of Utopia] never attainable Ungotten is indeed spice of life Must learn and accept it with smiling face Poetry of Wisdom not Boredom Thanks for sharing Waiting for many more such nuggets from your gifted mind/pen

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Kevin Carney 14 October 2010

This is brilliant! I think I got it but maybe not, its such a great commentary with such playfulness of your words. Beautifully penned.

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‘Teno Taktyeno Bhunji Ta’ ~ Gita …I find some resemblance with this message…indeed very difficult exercise to practice…but if fortunate we’re to succeed we’ll find solace contentment and the coveted peace…wonderful write … 10++ dr.sakti

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