MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ From Fathomless Skyline ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ From Fathomless Skyline ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010

From fathomless skyline
Hear deep carmine call.

My bosom like
Mellifluent octave
Swing sway why
In your melodic palm?

Your spry eyelids
Ruffle and flutter
Fluffy zephyr
Echoes ethos unzips
My bosom why?

Why these indolent
Illusionary indulgences
Creeps in me for more?

Fantasy faerie snuggle
In arms me no more
Biz buzzes kibosh n’ o’er
Better be as e’er ne’er
All izz virtual not real

O’ my chummy pal
Listen me ~ Better
Own my aching finery
In your deep recess trove
As lofty leisure luxury.

Lilt bedeck aurevoir
Open brink of gate.

Just a moment
Let me say
O’ Poetry
Go to flowers
Make them blithe happy.

A moment more
O’ lambent Venus
Sing temptingness
Affable agleam adieu.

From fathomless skyline
Hear deep call
O’ palsy-walsy
Pal listen me why not?

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Glossary: With humility some glossary given for what I tried to express.
[1] Chummy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends
[2] Faerie ~ The enchanted realm of fairies
[3] Blithe ~ Carefree and happy and lighthearted
[4] Temptingness ~ The power to entice or attract through personal charm
[5] Affable ~ Diffusing warmth and friendliness
[6] Palsy-walsy ~ [used colloquially] having the relationship of friends

Note: Spelling change is experimental.
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Comments about ~ From Fathomless Skyline ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Subbaraman N V (11/10/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import! (Report)Reply

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  • Subbaraman N V (11/10/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    Great I feel- but at this age I am not able to fathom the real meaning and import! (Report)Reply

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  • Miroslava OdalovicMiroslava Odalovic (10/15/2010 4:09:00 AM)

    The voice can die out if unheard. Hope the You of this poem heard. Hope for the best, always. Be happy :) (Report)Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (10/13/2010 1:24:00 PM)

    Wisdom manifesting itself through you, my friend, deep and excellent write! (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Carney (9/23/2010 12:48:00 AM)

    Amazing use of words they just floated on air as I read it.Nice use of metaphors. Thank you for sharing.I am jealous I can't write half as well as you lol. (Report)Reply

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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (8/2/2010 4:27:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It is a love poem with a difference, it has a little bit of erotica and a little bit of humor which contributes to it's appeal.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2010 7:21:00 PM)

    Why these indolent
    Illusionary indulgences
    Creeps in me for more? .... ya it is quite imagery in question but real one..makes me to ponder over.. nice enticing too....10
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  • Zack Krzeminski (7/31/2010 3:58:00 PM)

    a very enticing poem for one with great imagination
    i give a 10
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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (7/23/2010 4:33:00 AM)

    I'm so old I need a new dictionary. (Report)Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (7/21/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    abstract lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem.... (Report)Reply

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  • Dr. V. Chakravorty (7/7/2010 10:10:00 AM)

    Classy Poem…adieu made very touchy and appealing…

    ‘O’ my chummy pal
    Listen me ~ Better
    Own my aching finery
    In your deep recess trove
    As lofty leisure luxury.’…here the poem has reached to the acme of emotion unlimited…in a melancholy easel…to me this melancholy has become magnanimous… unstinted… munificent… bounteous-vibe…
    10++
    Dr. V.
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  • Photode Photode (7/4/2010 1:13:00 PM)

    Mellifluent fountain ... in rilling splendor…readers ‘tour de force’… ‘From fathomless skyline’ we’re hearing not adieu …but lambent Venus Singing temptingness melody…finest emotion in luxury of lachrymation…very well done Ma’am
    10++
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  • Rediffusion [bapi] Effusion [chakravorty] (7/1/2010 1:58:00 PM)

    Very soft and lithe poetry…crossed the world of virtuality to reality …the words are live and alive with all brilliance and brightness …canvas and emotion are very befitting and very much heart touching…

    ‘A moment more
    O’ lambent Venus
    Sing temptingness
    Affable agleam adieu…’ this reminds me the play Othello where Othello before assassinating Desdemona…asked for one more kiss…
    10+
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  • Omar Ibrahim (7/1/2010 6:29:00 AM)

    beautiful! i hope i can be like you but of course it's a dream: D
    thanks for sharing
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  • Raj Nandy (6/28/2010 10:10:00 PM)

    This poem drew my attention because of my poem - 'Visions of the Deep Blue Emphyrean'! Your poem is well written from a new angle! Notes are always helpful due to the cross section of our readers!
    -Raj
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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (6/27/2010 10:24:00 AM)

    Within the frame of virtuals, very nice depiction of emotions and sensuality executed. Submission of glossary is very useful.Your poems and comments entail an excellent use of vocabulary without being flowery.Final words as per my perception are putting an end to these imaginations--am I right? For voting I always use secret ballot, but these days secret submission is eluding me, so franchising open vote by giving much more than ten. (Report)Reply

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  • Rinki Nandy (6/25/2010 12:57:00 PM)

    your diction is unbeatable, i enjoyed flying across while reading and i must confess that your glossary is really helpful. b'ful imagination, i have finally stopped thinking in its summit. it's lovely 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (6/25/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    Brilliant work the sky is blue and wide enjoy the pleasure of flying, can treased a lot... and listen the powerful integreated voice AUM...thanks 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty (6/25/2010 12:57:00 AM)

    Bondage never breaks if it lies in the soul. An intense flame of love and departing embracing together with an electrified shocking sensation to the reader.

    Let the fathomless skyline hang on hollowness, here on earth we are. A gravitational force is also there. So life is so cracked and marvellous at the same phase of time.

    Be stout and take challenges of time.
    Well-written another experience of poem.
    Run long.....long.....to blend the earth with your creative fragrance.

    Regards,
    10++++
    pranab
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  • Milica Franchi De Luri (6/25/2010 12:44:00 AM)

    Wow.......i think this poem is so beautifully written, even the classics would be delighted reading it......it is like a enigma.......10+ (Report)Reply

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