Gaudi Poem by M.J. Lemon

Gaudi

Rating: 5.0


steel beams hold in place
the facade we all admire
hope's invisible

Monday, January 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: inner world,personality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2020

Beautiful Senryu, Lemon Sir. I have been several times to Anthony's art work and I am happy to see that the Spanish Government finishes the great artwork of Gaudi. Though that can always be perfectioned, but Gaudi's art is saved from rusty beams.So very pity that he has never experienced the finalizing of his immense Art. Great Senryu

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Mj Lemon 22 January 2020

Thank you for these amazing words, Sylvia. Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

Invisible hope shines with beauty of expression on face. Revisiting this poem we really very glad. An interesting poem is excellently penned.10

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Mj Lemon 27 November 2018

Thank you so much, Kumarmani. I appreciate your finding something new upon a return visit.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 April 2018

For Gaudi perhaps his hopes had been realized and certainly seen; his Sagrada Famiia being one of the most popular attraction in Spain and with a number of his creations being declared World Heritage sites. Your poem is most inspiring, Thank you Mj

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Mj Lemon 23 April 2018

Thank you so much, Loke. And I agree that so much of Gaudi's vision has been realized....perhaps, the dream has come true.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 January 2018

Invisible to others, and to our superficial self, is hope. But it lies deep within. Just waiting. For a flicker of light. Then it starts to unfold. The adventure of self-discovery has begun. And when it's over, the brilliant light will spread throughout the universe. M.J., as always, your poetry inspires. And empowers! This beauty has inspired me to empower with a new poem. I'll inform you when it's ready. Keep on writing these beauties! All The Best In The New Year! !

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Mj Lemon 12 January 2018

Richard, thank you so very much. I look very much forward to your poem. All the best for a prosperous, productive, meaningful and poetic 2018!

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Muhammad Ali 12 January 2018

Hi Mark, contrast of frame and face and sprinkles of hope. hope plays the role of some secret! ! OK, let's admire the look and attitude hopefully the inner is also beautiful.

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Mj Lemon 12 January 2018

Muhammad, thank yous so very much. Indeed that real meaningful inner beauty could be that most valuable gem. Thanks again.

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