lovely lingerie
a slip that revealed so much
I kept my mouth shut
Great observation that silenced you. I see a satire and humor both in your 3 lines.10++
I get that way when I see a naked or near naked man. Bravo!
I always knew you were an intelligent man.... they are the ones who can enjoy scenery without jumping up and down and shouting and pointing! By the way, senryu becomes you! As do many other styles, but I find brevity is a hard accomplishment to conquer and you do it as easily as breathing. Excellent and worthy of an abundance of dancing 10+++++++++++++++
Thank you, Kevin! Your comment- priceless, and almost a perfect senryu.
You might keep yours dropped but if I saw a women like that my jaws on the floor.
Even if it revealing, your mouth shut or not... Face mask still on... 😆
Richard, Yes! Marilyn, Tom, and that walk down a NY street after The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Just brilliant, Richard! Thanks so much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ASK HER TO TAKE IT OFF THE WORLD MUST ENJOY HER MORE THAN POETRY ALONE MJL MISSED YOU U DON'T NOW COME ALONG WATCHING HER LINGERIE FALL MAY BE MJL WE LOVE YOU AND HER ALL