Gentle Rain: Simple Pleasures Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Gentle Rain: Simple Pleasures

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The gentle rain is falling
It washes out my soul
As I stand beneath it
It makes my body whole.

The gentle tears of heaven
Takes my worries and my cares
Takes the pain within my heart
To start it's own repairs.

My mind which was tormented
Was given then surcease
The problems in my mind
finally in given peace.

The problems which I thought
Could never be resolved
Once beneath the gentle rain
all at once dissolved.

And as I walk amid the trees
To saviour the rustic smell
I can feel my spirits lift
No longer trapped in hell.

Just lift my foot then put it down
And continue on this way
Natures sights and smells
Make me want to stay.

When my life will be full of doubt
And it seems so hard to talk
Wait for the rain to gently fall
Then, take a gentle walk.

Thursday, April 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 09 April 2009

oh how lovely those simple pleasures of life and then that gentle rain ---washes away all your blues. This reminds me of Madonnas lovely song 'Rain'. -10 anjali

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hmmmm... enjoyable... +10. (had to rate this one)

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Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

Great flow of words, so gentle like the rain............

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Ency Bearis 09 April 2009

nice flow, nice to read..well penned..great poem...10

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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