Give Me A Break! Poem by Surayya Abbas

Give Me A Break!

Rating: 5.0


Give me a break!
Just to do nothing
And to think nomore
And to stop listening
Anything wrong for the time being.

Give me a break!
Just to feel not guilty
Of any fault
And not to be informed
Of any terrific news.

Give me a break!
Just to take a deep breathe
In cool air at night
And do something slowely and carefully
To open new ways
For a fearless life.

Give me a break!
Just to check my locker
And remove all desires
Once valuable
Worthless now.

Give me a break!
And let me live
Like a rational being
With inside
So luminous, so truthful.





1/21/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 21 January 2009

Gets to that point at times.

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Muizza Abbas 21 January 2009

Its a really nice poems and sometimes we really need a break from all aur sorrounding things and people........ to start life from new page........! Really trully speaking....... Good work

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

May you have many illuminating moments in the landscapes of you mind. Poignant write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Akram Saqib 10 March 2009

great request for break.good words 10

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ata khan 12 February 2009

Really nice, naya andaaz hai, more please

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sumaira .....ir 05 February 2009

don't ask for it just do it........ a sensitively write poem really like it 10/10

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Amin Khan 26 January 2009

Yor are too innocent asking for such a break. Good desire possible in utopia....!

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