'Give Us An Image' Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

'Give Us An Image'



'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.
How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe they've been deceived.~

'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.
How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe they've been deceived.~

The ending of those quick to pick declarations,
With a purpose to serve...
An undeserved but praised exclusivity,
Of choices preferred.
And voices heard with words to refuse,
The many distressed and left oppressed.

Those selected and rising to heights,
With their images imposed.
And despising with indifference,
Others appearing they wanted with wishes...
Dismissed from their sight.

As clouded delusions of their influence fades away...
Reality concealed,
Reveals they have been...
Historically betrayed.

'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.
How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe they've been deceived.~

'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.
How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe they've been deceived.~

The ending of those quick to pick declarations,
With a purpose to serve...
An undeserved but praised exclusivity,
Reveals a betrayal.
And images portrayed by those feeding at the feast,
Now discover themselves crawling...
On bare knees and weakened feet.

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe they've been deceived.~

'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.
How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.~

'Give us an image.
One that wont diminish.

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.~

'How can we exist...
Unconsciously following into a total darkness? '

~Hear the misdeeds of the doers,
Pleading.
To now believe,
They have been deceived.~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 December 2013

First of all Merry Christmas to you, your loving family, friends and Americans.. you have created a good scene here and you ask how people can walk in the total darkness and it is the question and quest of logic and science, but the creatures live below the earth and in the deep water normally don't see the light, but they do whatever we do, except for the reasoning. Just like that what we call as light may be the total darkness to some other being or the dark holes to our eyes.. Any way I sincerely thank your good effort to push the readers to reason their actions..Thank you dear friend..

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Marvin Brato 24 December 2013

Soul searching is spiritual, deceivers are exposed by their own deeds... be vigilant and do not be deceived time and again!

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