Given Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Given

Rating: 5.0


It was in a deluge of promise's Given...

While wrapped in the bliss of your arms

That sweet surrender was Given freely

Totally intoxicated by your charismatic charms;


It was in an overwhelming kiss Given

While lying closer than ever before...

That i knew beyond any shadow of doubt...

That you - i would forever adore;


It was in the sheer magic of the moment...

While gazing into your fiery eyes

That i knew at last we had made it

To the heavens most ecstatic sky;


By, Theodora Onken

March 8,2016

Tuesday, March 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A write about finding true long lasting love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 08 March 2016

Kelly, thank you so very much! ! What an honor it is to have you review my words and in such a kind and positive way.

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Kelly Kurt 08 March 2016

The rapture of love. Nicely penned

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