Giving In Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Giving In

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Like a piece of Chalk

I was full-

Of lust and lustre,

Of dreams and colour,

Of desire and stature

Before I started

Running in your world,

On your black board heart.



I made scratches

On your heart-

Lines of pleasure,

Words of sunshine,

Stanzas of moonshine,

Stories of conjugation

Until I was

Completely lost.

Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: broken future,broken heart,dedication,giving,longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 13 February 2018

Until I was Completely lost. Amazing write.10

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Sanjukta Sahoo 10 October 2017

I made scratches On your heart- Lines of pleasure, Words of sunshine, Stanzas of moonshine, Stories of conjugation Until I was Completely lost. Wow what a beautiful write, subhas. କାଲାଆଗରେ ମୂଳା ଚୋବେଇ ଲାଭ କଣ.. ଆମେରିକା ର ଟିନେଜର କଣ ରୂପକଳ୍ପ ବୁଝିବେ..ଏଣୁ ନିଜର କବିତା ଆଡକୁ ଧ୍ୟାନ ଦେବା ହିଁ ଭଲ । Thanks for the poem. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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