This age
Has left
Far
Far behind
That age
When pleasure
In glee
Could not thrive.
Pats and hugs,
Display
Of care
In abundance
With flair
And,
All adhere
With derided
Values
Walks
With elan
To bury
His clan
With panache
Glee
Gleefully
Thrives
In parochial minds
Fails to see
The fresh water sea
Whose depth and shores
If ever
Will consummate
With the eyes
He beholds.
Well said Sir. Many pleasure are being missed. Just few year ago the world was not such a terrible place to live in. Actually we miss pleasure or to be more precise we think life not to be enjoyed the moment we come up with responsibilities. Other wise the joys are still there. The time does not change. the mind and mentality change. I like the words chosen for this thoughtful write and the pattern is equally attractive. Well done.
a glee-some poem.............but where's glee n giggle?
The fresh water sea Whose depth and shores If ever Will consummate With the eyes He beholds. like it
very nice..Glee Gleefully Thrives In parochial minds Fails to see The fresh water sea Whose depth and shores If ever Will consummate With the eyes He beholds. -So well written
an interesting interpretation of different times and views..
woven with short words of pearls.......................glee and bliss that becoming extinct in human nature..........well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good but i would have liked a poem that built imageriay more