It's not fair it’s not right
Things I do seem not right
They just see things are wrong
Makes me sing a sad song
Then I see falling leaves
Then I sense hurting glares
I just feel cold rain drops
Feeling bad never stops
I don’t like working good
I just have dampen moods
Guitar strums are so sad
Each played tune sounds so bad
I just see gloomy days
I ignore happy ways
Moon goddess in the sky
Nowadays seems so shy
If they think I’m not good
My warm days are now cold
Feeling low not fired-up
Falling tears I can’t stop
'I just see gloomy days I ignore happy ways Moon goddess in the sky Nowadays seems so shy' But the question is, WHY?
Glue Me Inspired by other peoples' gloom faded flame of Orange-Blue, the last candle in the room I bloom Like Sunflowers in the Moon When the Dead refuse the tomb Le Plume consume my every move Needles on my every groove When there's nothing left to prove Gloom is nothing but a Mood. I am the creator of it, I'm the Gloom that Angels covet Agony inside the stomach May they hate the way I love it Understand thy way Above it Like the Hand that rocks the puppet Even Gloom can be Inspiring. P.X 11-10-13 3: 57
Life is not perfect nor people, so live life as it is and make the most of it! Nice write though.
great poem naida powerfully written. full of sadness and emotion
Lovely expression of feelings...just beautiful. Loved reading it Naida. What is it that makes you so sad?
wow, you surpass yourself with every poem. keep on creating. loved it. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Leaking Pen (Carlingford Australia ;) 9/20/2013 4: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Dear Naida What a great poetic line, from your 'Gloomy' poem, life is not a bed or roses I am told, you captured life's struggles amazingly in your poem I enjoyed the economy in your lines, they drive the point without going overboard, less is more my new found cup of tea!