Alas! There’s no one better than God
And He is cruel somewhat
God feels lonely
Although He has so many friends
Because
God is one of a kind
Even angels are not like God
Angels have wings
But God’s body has no wing
And they are like a dot to God
God is unable to create His own spouse!
That’s why it’s so hard to turn His mood on
And make Him satisfied.
Although God’s got all the powers
That exist in reality
He hasn’t got all the powers
That can be found in imagination.
God is neither a male nor a female -
God’s got more similarity
With mothers than others!
God’s got more similarity
With girls than boys!
Notwithstanding
Prophet Muhammad is the best creation
Since God's body is more like a male
And the universe is like His Holy Sperm
And
The Lord of the worlds
Is romantic, affectionate and loving.
I personally believe you poems are good and there is nothing unclear! I also personally believe everybody have the right to see things in their way. In the end most of us believe in something and religion it should take us all in one direction, and again in my point of view I don't see anything wrong in your poems. Just keep writing and express yourself but also it is good for you to get lots of review about your poems no matter negative or positive and you always will get comments as religion in our daily bread. take care
I found that very insightful on how you view god. The words balance the structure with such finesse, and i can say i sort of understand what you mean. I am not that clever but i can see that you have talent. Keep writing
I think It's a great insight into your mind on how you view God
Good you put your thoughts out about God everyone has him within...regards
Thanks for the invite, Your view of God is not the same view i have but i found your poem very interesting.
When it comes to the discussion of God I believe we are all entitled to our own opinion. Many believers have their own interpetation about God...as myself I like to see God more as a spirit who is able to dwell with in us to do the right things rather than a person set out into man kind....thank you for writing this poem because I think it has really opened up the gap to what believers think.
Man arafa nfsa faqad arafa rabba. If you know yourself, you know your lord.- Prophet Mohammad(S) Know thyself- Socretes. Humanbeing is the whole creation- Devilpoet
That's a great way to picture what God might think, feel, hope, and other humanly expressions that she might also feel.. Great poem..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks, Asif.Your poem about God is a nice one; keep writng