(god) Exhumed Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(god) Exhumed

Rating: 3.1


Sleep eludes me
The vulture of my wants was devouring my soul
It was feasting and ravaging with a savage delight
I was choking in my own vomit
Desires, Greed, soical conditioning and id
Exhausted and lost in my self constructed maze
Prolonged by ill begotten beliefs
Of the twisted pathway of my life
The acrid stench of my putrefying decaying being
Wretched my soul
And I threw up
A foul, green, viscous, bile fluid
All that was me
All that I was
All that I wanted to be
And that set me free

You filled my empty hollow being
Exhumed from my decay
Now
I am a child once again
Looking at wonder and awe
At all You have created with so much love
All You have touched and transformed
From dust into a shimmering display of fireworks
I quiver with the resonance
Of Your cosmic consciousness
And rejoice every moment that You have gifted me
Ommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

MY WORD! ...DID WE JUST GO FROM EXCORCISM TO EXERCISING? OR TOGA TO YOGA! lol! Jokes aside, this is graphically awesome work...Your mind-set to elicit such expression, in itself is a finished work of art...but to architect it, with such meticulous & vivid statement, is the coup de grace'...Excellent Crafting...brilliant imagework, T.O. FjR

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