Beneath the canopy of stars,
The stillness of the night
Seeped into my being
And chilled me out.
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I absolutely love the Orchestra--you're creative likening of this serene scene to and Orchestra is a masterful stroke of brilliance!
God moves in a glorious way, His wonders to perform! He makes the night a praise and calms the raging storm! So fabulously written! With powerful imagery that makes the moment described eternal and resonant!
Insightful rendition penned with clarity of thought and powerful images of beauty.
Rose Marie Juan Austin is such a good poetress whos poems take you to another place and time.Love this great job
simply beautiful...... i fell into imagaintion of the beauty of nature with you as i read your beautiful poem. tony
Then came a symphony of sounds: The chirping of the crickets Followed by the baritone voices Of the bullfrogs Continuously crying out their names A plethora of fireflies
Being a great fan of the outdoors I understand the work and beauty of Gods hand...10+++
Rose Marie you are one of nature's observers and nothing seems to escape your keen eye or for that matter your elegant poetry prose hand. You wrap it all up magnificently in this wonderful poetry concerto with a brilliant end verse. Five stars for this and I wish it was more. Many thanks and take care.
While eloquently sing on the beauty of Nature you sing the glory of God also, Rose Marie. Top poem. Congrats 10+
Dear Jason, A great mind makes the great images, and so the poem becomes great. FIRST of all, that is because of the great mind of the poetess, and so we get the great poetess. Basic of all: the poetess´ great mind. Thank you if you shall read this, dear Jason.
These nocturnal sounds move our spirits and delight us! This beautiful orchestra is created by God's creatures and it is directed by the great Choir Leader.....! Only a poet is sensitive to such sounds and you have presented them in a masterly way. A beautiful thought and a lovely poem. Top marks!
After dusk fall, when everyone has retired to his home for rest and when the day's activities are stilled, there is a calm and silence. During these early hours of the night, a profusion of sweet sounds fall in our ears.... the buzz of crickets, the song of birds, the croaking of frogs, the hooting of owls- all having a distinctive melody and sweetness.
After this cold spell I can not wait to get out and listen to the great Maestro Orchestra. Just love this poem.10+
(2) ......then came a symphony of sounds, and WOW! I have enjoyed very much God's Orchestra. Such A Beauty. A marvelous impressive poem, Mrs. Juan-Austin, most beautifully worded. A myriad of 10's for God's Completest Orchestra. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family.
Such greatest Beauty in God's Orchestra. These loveliest descriptions are so imaginable. The last five lines are most touching to my heart. The Great Maestro Himself is here and is conducting His Completest Orchestra performed by His noblest creatures. FIRST of ALL: all silence, no any sounds, only the rhythmic beatings of your lonely heart...
I appreciate the comment of Deepak Kumar Pattanayak. The members of God's Orchestra are many so the music varies from sweet to sweeter to sweetest. Brilliant poem really.
Glory be to God! Thank you for sharing!