I stand up to admire my work.
I knew this would be big,
but I really didn't expect so much.
It is colossal! Humongous!
"This may be a world record, " I think.
"I didn't know I had it in me! "
I take another step back,
but before I can get my cell phone
out of my pocket to take a picture
that automatic flushing mechanism
kicks in, and in another moment
it is gone forever.
Date & Time: 9/25/2020 4: 19: 00 PM Member: Susan Williams Comment: Hahahaha... the poem was amusing but what you chose as topics of the poem had me chuckling: addiction, baby, body, cake, daddy, ego, fun, goals, half, indecision. I think ego would actually have worked as a topic for this! ! ! Susan, I actually had a topic starting with every letter of the alphabet except x, but they didn't all show up when the poem got posted. There must be a limit.
Hahahaha... the poem was amusing but what you chose as topics of the poem had me chucklng: addiction, baby, body, cake, daddy, ego, fun, goals, half, indecision. I think ego would actually have worked as a topic for this! ! !
This little verse is so, so funny, and it doesn't take long to figure out what he's talking about. Still, haven't we all felt like this at least one time? ? ? ?
Thank you for commenting, Milton! When you first left your comment, I did not have the ability to reply.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ah yes, amazing the how the trophies of life change drastically with age! Good one pard!