Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Good Being - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Good being

Make it wonderful, and successful
Pray an almighty to be merciful
That shall bring real happiness
And smile on face

Live happily
With what you have already
No need to build castles in the air
That shall not be fair

He has given you
Enough to pass through
Happiness with calmness
So show it on the face

It shall be wrong
If you do no stay among
Your own people
And create troubles

See them with same affection
And keep god relation
You need not be a rich person
But good man with reasons

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Comments about Good Being by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/12/2015 6:18:00 AM)


    Nice poem , let the peace prevail everywhere Aamin.... (Report) Reply

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  • (12/11/2015 11:46:00 PM)


    Excellent poem reiterating the age old saying, Contentment is bliss. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2015 9:24:00 PM)


    I love this. But good (wo) man with reasons. Beautifully enlightening
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2015 9:22:00 PM)


    welcome Nella Loagnod likes this
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2015 8:23:00 PM)


    See them with same affection
    And keep god relation
    You need not be a rich person
    But good man with reasons
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 11, 2015


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