Please say goodbye,
do exist no more as a lie,
or a dream
that forever remains a dream.
Don't you linger any longer within my breath,
I saved a memory of you in a box which will never sheath.
'It's not that I'm not sad',
I said.
Death as your companion,
has sent you a beautiful invitation.
A bungalow was prepared in Heaven's Vale,
It is so cruel of me to make you fail
to achieve what you deserved,
a beautiful place you were preserved.
I have tried to bear you leaving,
with the prayers me sing.
It's your time, this twilight's gift,
so please,
after mine,
say your goodbye..
Sorry seems to be the hardest word, goodbye seems to be the punitive word but hey, what the heck...........life must go on.Nice piece Kite.
sad.......one......touchy...............beautiful.............
like this part.I saved a memory of you in a box which will never sheath. just so Wow! ! speechless.
My dearest good bye to you, while you go in sky. My heart is falling apart while i watch you travelling in heavenly cart. Sad write
I too say like Omar--so young and why such thoughts neways beautiful poem speciall i liked these: 'It's your time, this twilight's gift, so please, after mine, say your goodbye.' -10 anjali
how can someone so young sing words so sad... deeply moving dear
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is sweet but lonely.. I like it though great write kite... Krista