Goodbye Poem by kite remedy

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Please say goodbye,
do exist no more as a lie,
or a dream
that forever remains a dream.
Don't you linger any longer within my breath,
I saved a memory of you in a box which will never sheath.
'It's not that I'm not sad',
I said.
Death as your companion,
has sent you a beautiful invitation.
A bungalow was prepared in Heaven's Vale,
It is so cruel of me to make you fail
to achieve what you deserved,
a beautiful place you were preserved.
I have tried to bear you leaving,
with the prayers me sing.
It's your time, this twilight's gift,
so please,
after mine,
say your goodbye..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is sweet but lonely.. I like it though great write kite... Krista

0 0 Reply
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 November 2008

Sorry seems to be the hardest word, goodbye seems to be the punitive word but hey, what the heck...........life must go on.Nice piece Kite.

0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

sad.......one......touchy...............beautiful.............

0 0 Reply
asma Jone 03 December 2008

like this part.I saved a memory of you in a box which will never sheath. just so Wow! ! speechless.

0 0 Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth 03 December 2008

My dearest good bye to you, while you go in sky. My heart is falling apart while i watch you travelling in heavenly cart. Sad write

0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

I too say like Omar--so young and why such thoughts neways beautiful poem speciall i liked these: 'It's your time, this twilight's gift, so please, after mine, say your goodbye.' -10 anjali

0 0 Reply
Omar Ali Sabar 29 November 2008

how can someone so young sing words so sad... deeply moving dear

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success