The sky seems so bright today
Why I float on the breeze today
People who never had a ray
Why are they laughing today?
Why the leaves dance with joy
I can hear what the flowers say
Did I change my route today?
Is it they who changed their way
Why things are so bright today
Why I smile all the day
Do you know what they say?
That I got your heart today
So light... it makes the head spin. So romantic.. like dancing on the clouds. Zen
Its a lovely poem Tara. Simple words and the last line brings out the beauty in it. Ashish.
Tara, the sunshine of love positively beams out of this very fine poem. jim
An excellent little poem centered on a single emotion. But the extension of internal joy to nature and objects around is done very well - without any artificiality or pretences. It makes the poem simple and beautiful.
Very nicly done Tara I agree with Jerry today a little rep.. but all in all very nice....
Tara, this is light-hearted and optimistic little poem, 'today' got a bit repetitious, other than that fine. Fondly...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is so romantic, though i don't like this type of poetry, i found it really good one, are u in love dear?