Tara Acharya

Rookie - 25 Points (June 30,1981 / India)

Got Your Heart................... - Poem by Tara Acharya

The sky seems so bright today
Why I float on the breeze today
People who never had a ray
Why are they laughing today?

Why the leaves dance with joy
I can hear what the flowers say
Did I change my route today?
Is it they who changed their way

Why things are so bright today
Why I smile all the day
Do you know what they say?
That I got your heart today

Comments about Got Your Heart................... by Tara Acharya

  • (4/25/2007 5:05:00 AM)

    that is a very great thinking of yours. you are really blessed with imagination and true use of words. i really enjoyed very much.
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    i will be very greatful if you comment me
    \thank u keep it up.
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  • (4/10/2007 2:23:00 AM)

    Its a lovely poem Tara. Simple words and the last line brings out the beauty in it.

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  • (3/18/2007 5:23:00 AM)

    Tara, the sunshine of love positively beams out of this very fine poem. jim (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2007 12:18:00 PM)

    An excellent little poem centered on a single emotion. But the extension of internal joy to nature and objects around is done very well - without any artificiality or pretences. It makes the poem simple and beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2007 10:49:00 PM)

    Very nicly done Tara I agree with Jerry today a little rep.. but all in all very nice.... (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2007 3:47:00 PM)

    Tara, this is light-hearted and optimistic little poem, 'today' got a bit repetitious, other than that fine. Fondly... (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2007 8:23:00 AM)

    So light... it makes the head spin. So romantic.. like dancing on the clouds. Zen (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2007 5:09:00 AM)

    this is so romantic, though i don't like this type of poetry, i found it really good one, are u in love dear? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 11, 2011

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