She, no more, but forever with me
My grand mother, my proud deity.
Clad with black sari and while blouse
Long black hair! Only a few silver lines.
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What a nice way to introspect and what a worthy way to pay tribute to your adorable dear ones in life! Vidi’s this poem is almost a biography of her ajji. The reader will feel the outburst of love respect and affectionate sympathy that flow out incessantly through this poem. Very good composition this, Vidi. A ten.
Excellent tribute to Ajji................It is Like my'GrandMa
A very touching poem about your relation with your grandmother who was widowed early. All that she transmitted to you, by teaching or otherwise. Her luck was also to have a granddaughter who would remember her in her poems; Thanks Vidi I was really touched by your poem and the effort to amek this hommage.
Am inclined to wish even some from the new generations were yet able to find ease and intuition enough in life in between these fast lanes of modern world's overspeeding course so to evolve into such grannys for the coming young ones to remember as you do
absolutely touching piece..congratulations and a happy birth day, though belated...
Now i know where you get it from! the seed does not fall far from the tree