Green-Eyed Suicide Poem by Tatianna Rei Moonshadow

Green-Eyed Suicide

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Green-Eyed Suicide
With life such a blur
Wrists scarred from back to front
This is the life for her
This Green-Eyed Suicide
So beautiful as she breaks
Hurting so much more
With every smile she fakes
Shes feeling like shes lost
There is no other way out
Lately its only suicide
Thats all she thinks about
Covered up in bruises
From the parents who should love
The ones who should hold her
But never show a gentle touch
Alone as far as she can tell
She only has her best friend
Though she thinks no one loves her
And is determined this is the end
She doesn't know I love her
She doesn't know how much I care
Now she never will
For she is hanging there
I wish I could've saved her
Before her days were through
She was my best friend
And I gave the only love she knew
Now she lies so lifeless
So beautiful through my tear-stung eyes
She was everything to me
And now she is a Green-Eyed Suicide

Ariana E. 23 March 2018

Bless you on your journey of remembrance and lost her in a tragedy, but the point here is that you care. Use your loving heart and honour your lasting friendship by making a difference in the world. I don't know you, but I want to see you shine...for her.

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jazmine kristen 07 March 2008

why didnt you tell her

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jazmine kristen 15 June 2007

WOW, this is the best poem Ive read on here. thats so emotionl. I love it and it almost made me cry I hope thats she knos now that she meant the world to u and I bet she watching over u from heaven.

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Iva Wells 11 August 2006

i agree with Desirae M. wow great poem sad but great keep up the work on poems if you want to chat send a message to my Inbox

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Desirae E. 02 August 2006

wow great poem good job

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