Growing With Grapes Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Growing With Grapes

Rating: 3.6


Growing with grapes,
Reflect the tapes,
In helpless dreams,
Their flowing streams,
From a valley so green,
The grapes I preen,
No juice for the wine,
But the wrinkles shine,
In a loose thicker gown,
The grapes are brown,
The gone greenery,
Changed the scenery,
The raisin is dry,
Its taste I try,
Viscous is the juice,
With me on a deuce,
A delicious game,
O God! In your name,
Neither love is a shame,
Nor it's blame,
Sweeter than the grapes,
Raisin dances in the tapes!

Growing With Grapes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 01 March 2019

With the growing age love is sweeter than what it was in the youth. A lovely metaphor.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 March 2019

O God! In your name, Neither love is a shame, Nor it's blame, thank u dear Akhtar....... grapes and raisins.. you have presented a thought in a new and original way. thank u dear poet. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 March 2019

A beautiful piece on growing gracefully like raisin

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Kostas Lagos 02 March 2019

Really clever poem Akhtar!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 March 2019

sour grapes wine sweet and red grapes red wine We all have a bottle as we dine all sweeter grapes are mine ask Divine they within my heart entwine lovely ones like oranges kind I love grapes red and wine

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2019

A wonderful poem that captures the intricacies of aging. Yet aging comes wisdom and a blessing. Happy are those who blessed with a long happy life. Liked the two closure lines. Despite the wrinkles it is still the sweetest. A beautiful poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 March 2019

neither love is a shame nor blame, good write

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