Gun On My Tongue Comments

A ten for you and Patricia's comment too. lol

Oh, Dave, between your poem and Patricia's comment, I laughed so much I nearly fell off my chair! Funniest one for a long time. Keep them coming. Love, Fran the Fan xx

Love your poems which have a message mixed with your brand of humour. I can visualize the biy with the gun hanging thru his mouth..lol! ! Love..TO

The skates would have been heavier hanging from your tongue...lol Ah the memories of childhood....thanks for sharing.

Another gem. Ashish.

Very well put Dave. The message clear, without tainting the nostalgic nuance of the tale. Danny