Haiku - 113 Granite Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 113 Granite

Rating: 5.0


the granite marbles
shining under the moonlight
a stench filled carpet

Wednesday, August 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 14 August 2016

Under the Moonlight! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2016

Definitely granite marbles are shining effectively. Interesting sharing done here. Nicely penned...10

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T Rajan Evol 10 August 2016

Nature Vs. Humans. Nice contest

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2016

A beautiful idea about what nature has given to us and what man has made for himself and disgusted in the process nicely articulated in the poem. Thanks, Asim ji.

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